Morning Gabriele - I think you've cracked the magician character - reads instantly, and I love the little 'low-slung crotch' detail of his trousers - gives him such a loveably shambolic quality...
I think you have pretty much nailed these, Gabriele - well done. The villains colouring is much better now - just turning down the colour a little has made him more sinister. I think the sidekick was always a strong character (if it aint broke....), and the hero now is telling the audience a lit about his personality. Great stuff and good luck with the crit
Morning Gabriele - I think you've cracked the magician character - reads instantly, and I love the little 'low-slung crotch' detail of his trousers - gives him such a loveably shambolic quality...
ReplyDeleteI think you have pretty much nailed these, Gabriele - well done. The villains colouring is much better now - just turning down the colour a little has made him more sinister. I think the sidekick was always a strong character (if it aint broke....), and the hero now is telling the audience a lit about his personality. Great stuff and good luck with the crit
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