Hi Gabriele, There are some lovely sketches here and your characters have a lot of charm, which is not not that easy to achieve. I think the magician hero is great - the over large hat creates a distinctive silhouette. I think humour is a good way to show this guys vulnerability - i would push that, so maybe having him not being the greatest magician etc. I think the villain is interesting - I can see you style coming through all this designs. I would look at the design of the villain and the sidekick, because there are similarities in the shapes and proportions - i would look at making these characters more distinctive. Anyway, good stuff, and i look forward to seeing more!
Hi Gabriele,
ReplyDeleteThere are some lovely sketches here and your characters have a lot of charm, which is not not that easy to achieve. I think the magician hero is great - the over large hat creates a distinctive silhouette. I think humour is a good way to show this guys vulnerability - i would push that, so maybe having him not being the greatest magician etc. I think the villain is interesting - I can see you style coming through all this designs. I would look at the design of the villain and the sidekick, because there are similarities in the shapes and proportions - i would look at making these characters more distinctive.
Anyway, good stuff, and i look forward to seeing more!