I'm a bad person ( another work in progress )

This drawing is so wrong in so many ways. ( "try the new shit on a stick... yummy" )

I'm a bad person

Work in progress

This is a drawing for a competition for the movie The imaginarium of doctor parnassus for any further details click on the link.
( I want to win that mcbook pro so badly!!!!! )

polishing characters

Ok so, I took two of the 3 characters and I tryied to polish them and think about some expressions. How do they look?

Any suggestion for the villain's suit? Colors? ( btw I tried the usual colors used for bad guys and villains like black and red but I think they won't work )

Of course there's a new villain too

The vaude-villain is still fat which can lead us to some comedy reliefs in the whole story but still has some features of the typical villain like the sharp nose and teeth or the skinny hands

new sidekick

Ok so if our hero is a magician his sidekick keeping in mind that vaudeville means comedy could be a chubby lazy bunny who doesn't want to help Tom with his magic tricks but still manage to help him on his adventure

tom the magician and houdini's magic wand

I thought about the story... We have our hero Tom, a clumsy shy and not so brilliant magician, his dream is to become a grat magician just like houdini was. The story develops in the last years of vaudeville in the usa, after houdini's death in 1926. Our hero finds by chance houdini's magic wand which ha incredible powers... but he's not the only one who's intrested in this wand...

new ideas

here are some new ideas for the hero and the villain. And I think this is much better then the previous ones